Visitor’s Welcome…


“It is a great disguise. No one will ever suspect.” Flargon said.

“I agree. It is well hidden from the human eyes.” His mate, Susan, said. “Shall we now go to the ‘visitor center’?”

“It is acceptable.”

Just as they turned to walk away from their nights work of camoflaging the space craft, Carl, the town deviant, rode up on his dirt bike and looked at the two new comers.

“Sup,” Carl nodded.

“Greetings.” they both chimed.

“What’s with the space ship you got up on the tower?” Carl pointed up at the green metal Hershey’s kiss.

“S-s-s-spaceship?” Flargon sputtered. “What spaceship?”

“It is no use, husband.” Susan said. “He knows.”

Carl’s lips turned up in a grin just before the green ray ignited his body into a dust cloud of particles.

Flargon looked at Susan still holding theΒ Disinteraygun, his face cast in a dissapproving look.


“It is acceptable.” He shrugged. “Now, where is that visitor center?”




FFfAW #46

A flash fiction challenge of 150 words (+/- 25) using a photo prompt

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R. Todd

I'm older than I think I am and younger than I feel. I'm stuck in the 80's but relevant to today (oh I hope that last part is true). I think I am more of an enigma than I really am, but somehow still confound those who try to figure me out (or they just look at me weird, so I infer that). And I really hate my first name. Husband, father, Navy Vet, UCF graduate, cat owner (translate.. slave), wannabe writer, and all around big kid who is stuck in an adult world. Overall, I just... um.. something to something, blah blah blah. And that's all I got to say about that.

14 thoughts on “Visitor’s Welcome…”

    1. I feel as if I need to make a recurring “Carl” character. Have him have something horrible happen to him in each story. (which may or may not be a reference to how much I despise the character ‘Carl’ on TWD (a show I do not watch)).

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